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Peshawa
Thursday, February 26, 2004 - 12:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message



kavya inamaI-tIcaI p`iËyaa kXaI AsatoÆ kÜNato kÜNato GaTk (a p`iËyaocaa Baaga AsatatÆ inamaI-itcaI iËyaa Krca kvaI mhNavaNaayaa-Mcyaa iktpt hatat AsatoÆ p`tIBaa mhNatat tI kayaÆ AXaa ivaivaQa p`XaNaacaI ]<aro XaÜQaayacaa ha ek p`ya%na Aho...

(a izkaNaI ho AQaIca namaUd krNao mah%vaacao zrola kI kvaIta xao~atIla maI kÜNaI jaaNakar naahI. toMvha ho ilaKaNa jaaNakaraMnaa ik%pt Baavaola ha p`YNaca Aaho. pNa (a ilaKaNaacaa ]_oXa ihtgauja var yaÜgya cacaa- vhavaI va kavya (a p`karkDoÊ %yaacyaa inamaI-tI p`iËyao kDo Xaais~ya dRiYTkÜnaanao baiGatlao jaavao Asaa Aaho.

varIla AaÌtIcyaa AaQaaro maI maaJao vaIcaar maaMDNaar Aaho. p`qama AÌtItIla GaTkaMcaa pircaya k$na dotÜ.


AMtrivaXva : vaOcaairk BaavanaIk va AnauBava ivaXavaalaa AMtiva-Xva hI saMVa yaÜjalaI Aaho.

BaaYaa : p`%yaok BaaYaocao vaogaLo vaOiXaYz\ya Asato. tIcyaa AMgaBaut mayaa-daMcaa klaaÌtIvar inaiXcat Asaa pirNaama hÜtÜ.

AaroKna : BaaYaotIla CMda%mak AaroKaMnaa ]da. AlaMkarÊ vaR<ao [%yaadInaa hI saMVa vaaprlaI Aaho hI spYT pNao kovaL rcanaocao AaroKna mhNajao structure dXa-vaIto.

janak : klpnaaMcaI inamaI-tI krNaara GaTk. ho ek inamaI-tI yaM~ Aaho jyaatUna klpnaaÊ navao Xabp`yaÜgaÊ navyaa rcanaa (aMcaI inamaI-tI hÜt Asato.

AaÌtIbaMQa : janakatUna inamaa-Na hÜNaayaa- Xabd klpnaa rcanaa Baavanaa banQaalaa AaÌtIbanQa ho naava yaÜjalao Aaho.

]maI- : hI janak yan~acaI battery Aaho. inamaI-it kravaI Asao saaMgaNaarI hI " kL " Aaho..

pirxak : (a ek p`karcaa inayaM~k Aaho. saMyaÜjak Aaho. janak yaM~atUna inamaa-Na Jaalaolyaa klpnaaMcaI inavaD krNyaacao mau#ya kama tÜ krtÜ.

AaiBaÉcaI : Aaplyaa AavaDI inavaDI (a AMtiva-Xavaacaa Krotr Baaga Asatat. %yaaMcaa AMtBaa-va AMtiva-Xavaat na krta %yaaMcaavaogaL Asaa Baaga maanalaa Aaho. (at Aaplao bias ÊinakXaÊ watermarks [%yaadI gaÜXTIMcaa samaavaoXa hÜtÜ. eKadI gaÜXT AavaDto... vaIcaar pTtÜÊ ideaology AacarlaI jaato va ek AMtga-t standards inamaa-Na hÜtat %yaalaa ABaIÉcaI ho naava idlao Aaho...

klpnaaÊ Baavanaa : Krotr (acao naava badlaUna " klaabaIja " Asao krayalaa hvao tÜca %yaacaa ]_oXa Aaho.. ho ]maI-doNaaro ikMvaa ]maI- AalaI Asata isvakarlao jaaNaaro klaocao baIja Aaho. jyaacyaa BaÜvatI vaa jyaacyaa AnauXaMgaanao kvaIta tyaar hÜto.

klaaÌtI : ho inamaI-tI p`iËyaocao product Aaho


Peshawa
Thursday, February 26, 2004 - 12:48 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


inaima-tI p`iËyaa

eKada vaIcaarÊ BaavanaaÊ p`saMga ek Asvasqata inamaa-Na krtÜ jaI kaihtrI GaDvaINyaacaI ]maI- banato. ikMvaa inaima-tIcyaa maaQyamaatUna baahor yaoNyaacaI vaaT XaÜQato.

]maI- Aalyavar kdacaIt ³pNa AavaXyak naahI´ tÜca p`saMgaÊ BaavanaaÊ ivacaar klaabaIja hÜto va janakyaM~ iÔ$ laagato

inamaa-Na hÜNaayaa- p`%yaok klpnaa pirxak isvakart naahI tr AiBaÉcaInao maanya kolaolaI va baIjaacyaa jaastIt jaast javaL jaaNaarI rcanaa tÜ isvakrt jaatÜ. va klaaËutI Aakar gyaayalaa laagato. hI ek p`karo additive or appending process Aaho. ek AÜL ek kDvao AXaa táhonao kivata vaaZu laagato. inamaa-Na JaalaolaI klaaÌtI jaoMvha baIjaacao puNa-%vaanao ³pirxakacyaa mato´ p`kiTkrNa krto toMvha ]maI- iva$na jaato va janak yaM~ qaMDavato.



Yog
Thursday, February 26, 2004 - 4:25 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Peshwa,
klpnaa AavaDlaI.. qaÜDo maaJao ivacaar add krtÜ Aaho... :
varIla model maQao roYaaMcyaa jaagaI baaNa daKvalao tr ek saundr flowchart tyaar hÜvaU Xakola... ek maagaI- ikvaa dUmaagaI- one way or both way, jaaNaara baaNa daKvata Aalaa tr ibaja,apasaUna to klaa inamaI-tIpya-nt ek AKnD p`vaah /flow daKvata yaošla.. Aqaa-t yaa BB var ilaihtanaa vaoga vaogaL\yaa ivacaar maanDNaItuna ha flowchart satt "duÉst " hÜt rahIla.. va kdacaIt sarto XaovaTI sava-maanya Asao ek model banaU Xakola ..
tsao banalaoca tr final product mhNajao klaaËUitcao ek p`karo maulyaaMkna hI zrvata yaošla.. for ex:
if we assign Grades to each contributing parameter on scale of 1-5 , 1 being lowest,
then evaluating all such parameters will lead to a final (could be mean/median) grade of klaaËutI... yaamauLo kdacaIt
klaaËutI caa djaa- kovaL vaacak saapo@Xa na rhata ek
general acceptance level var isaw hÜvaU Xakola..... Aqaa-t yaa saazI 1 to 5 scale cao inayama vaa criterias ilaihNao hI i@laYT kama Aaho... pNa AXa@ya naahI...
punha varIla model parent maanalao tr vaoga vaogLo kavya p`kar ho %yaacao inherents maanaUna 1to 5 scale accordingly modify krta yaošla...
for ex: eKadI kivata inavvaL kivata mhNaUna yaa model maQao analyze kolyaasa %yaacaa djaa- XaovaTI 4 Aalaa tr kdacaIt tIca kivata gaJala yaa p`karat maa~ 3 yaa djaa-var AsaU Xakto...
AsaÜ... ima hardcore IT maQao naahI trI maaJyaa tuTpuMjyaa &anaacyaa AaQaaro jao saucalao to ilahIlao...

tuJyaa varIla model maQao ]maI- ha GaTk mau#ya idsatÜ Aaho trI baroca vaoLa Asaa AnauBava yaotÜ kI ra~I JaÜpot ikvaa svaPnaathI caar AÜLI saucatatÊ ikvaa DÜL\yaasamaÜ$na kqaa klpnaa sarktat.. hI ek p`karcaI saUPt ]maI- yaa model maQao kXaI kuzo daKvata yaošla ka to baGa... this is one which does not need any "stimulus" to activate!!!!

rsaga`hNaacaI hI klpnaa AavaDlaI.. pwt qaÜDI kIcakT vaaTto Aaho pNa definitely interesting.....

keep posting....

Bee
Thursday, February 26, 2004 - 10:55 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

sahee chalalay public ... :-)

Anwesha
Thursday, February 26, 2004 - 2:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Peshwa,
very innovative idea....interesting indeed... as pointed out by Yog, you can modify this using the Entity-Relationship (ER) approach and can also show inter-dependence, inheritance etc to make it more logical and simple to understand.....
Don't want to sound too technical but if u are familiar with UML(Unified Modeling Language) it would help you to describes the set of entities, their attributes and scenarios,shows the relationships among objects .....

keep up the good work...

Bee
Thursday, February 26, 2004 - 5:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Anwesha, OOPS che sagaLe funde jhaaDaayalaa miLaale naahee ga? :-) client server architecture hot aahe ase disatey :-) BTW, u r not the project leader here. We all are going to develop this model and hence just a mere programmer :-)

Anwesha
Thursday, February 26, 2004 - 10:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Bee, Aro yaoqao programmer caa job jarI idlaa kÜiNa trI AavaDola..... saQyaa iXakt Aaho.... PM / PL hÜNao Ôar laambcaI gaÜYT Aaho...
AsaÜÊ maI pNa kivata xao~atIla jaaNakar naahI... pNa poXvaa nao Cana p`maaNao sagaLo GaTk maaMDlao Aahot AaiNa jao confusion Aaho to GaTkana maQalao relationship daKvalao tr dUr hÜ[la Asao vaaTto. Bee AapNa IT AaiNa klaa dÜinh cao jaaNakar idsata .... so why don't u share your views too..


Nvgole
Friday, February 27, 2004 - 5:58 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

kivata inamaa-Na hÜtaMnaa varIla saaroca maa^Dola ekaca vya>It ekvaTlaolao Asato.

TIkakar ervhI prIxakacao kama krtat. %yaaMcaa sahBaaga kavya inaima-tIt k$na Gaota Aalaa tr kivata AaNaKI saksa hÜ} Xakola.

yaa Aqaa-nao varIla AaÌtIbaMQaacaI saMklpnaa mah%vaacaI Aaho.

}maI-p`Baavaat ]pjalaolyaa kivatolaa tXaIca jagaasamaÜr zovalyaasa jaI TIka saÜsaavaI laagato tI TIkakaraMcaa inaima-t sahBaaga Aalyaavar kmaI hܚla.

Asao kavyainamaI-tIcyaa p`ËIyaocao ivaBaajana krNyaat fayado saMBavatat.

hI klpnaa AiBanava Aaho. poXavyaaMcao itlaa janma idlyaa Katr haid-k AiBanaMdna.


Wakdya
Friday, February 27, 2004 - 7:56 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

poXavyaalaa baa( iTkakar naahI tr AMtrIcaa iTkakar ]Ô- pirxak Apoixat Asaavaa²

Paragkan
Friday, February 27, 2004 - 3:32 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

neat chart .... shrimant, baraach vichaar kelelaa disato tumhi prakriyechaa :-) kalpanaa chhaan aahe.

Yog
Friday, February 27, 2004 - 4:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Peshwe,
Aata mahalaatUna baahor yaa va ho AQao- saÜDlaolao yaM~ puro kra kI..

Peshawa
Sunday, March 07, 2004 - 6:03 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message



var inamaI-tIcaI p`ËIyaa AgadI saaQyaa Xabdat maaMDlaI Aaho. janakyaM~ svat : kuzlyaahI p`karcao inaNa-ya GaoNyaasa samaqa- maanalaolao naahI. AaMtiva-XvaÊ BaaXaa va AaroKna (aMcyaatUna maulaGaTk Gao}na to navaIna AËuitbaMQa navaIna saMklapnaa navaIna AMtga-t AnauBava inamaa-Na krt Asato jao punha BaaXaaÊ Antiva-Xva va AaroKnao (aMcaa Baaga banatat.

janakyaM~ jyaalaa creativity mhNata yao[la ho inasaga-d<a Aaho. pNa %yaacaa ivakasa va saMvaQa-na A%yaMt AvaXyak Aaho. ha vaIksa ho saMvaQa-na krayacao ksaoÆ Kup vaacanaÊ mananaÊ icantnaÊ iryaaja (acaa iktpt ]pyaÜga hÜtÜÆ ho p`XNa jaTIla Aahot (aMcaI sarL ]<aro dota yaoNaar naahIt. vaya>Ik maaJao mat Asao Aaho kI (a sagaL\yaa gaÜXTI jana@yaM~ ]<ama isqaitt va tjaoldar raKayalaa madt krtat AiNa mhNauna %yaa AavaXyak Aahot. %yaa janak yaM~acao ]<ama pÜXaNa krtat hoih Kro Aaho pNa tir sauQh jankyaM~atUna hÜNaarI inamaI-tI hI random sva$pacaI Asato. iryaajaanao (a maulat : random AsaNaayaa- yaM~alaa kaih p`maaNaat control krta yao] Xakto mhNajao eKVa ivaXaIXz AayaamaaMnamaQao %yaatUna tyaar hÜNaaro AËuitbaMQa AaNata yaotat. ho Aayaama AËuitbaMQaacaa pÜt ek mayaa-dotca sauQaaÉ Xaktat jyaalaa saturation ( iryaajaacyaa saMdBaa-t ) mhNata yao[la. pNa %yaacyaa puZo jaa}na AËuitbaMQaacaa pÜt sauQaarNao iryaajanao Xa@ya hÜt naahI tr to inasaga-d<aca mhNaayalaa hvao.

janak yaM~aica inasaga-<a mayaa-da kXaI saaMgata yao[laÆ eKadaca bauQQa ikMvaa XaMkracaya- Asau XaktÜ. ramanaujana saar#yaa eKaValaaca kovaL eKVa pustkacyaa AaQaaranao Aa@D\yaatIla KÜlavar Asalaolao kavya ilaihta yaoto. ho janakacao inasaga-d<apNa Aaho.

creativity cao BaXaMtr maI " p`itBaa " Asao krNaar naahI. p`tIBaa hI dÜna GaTkaMina imaLUna banato. pihlaa GaTk mhNajao janakyaM~ va dusara GaTk mhNajao pirxak.

pir@Xakacyaa baabtIt Asao mhNata yao[la kI to sauQaa inasaga-d<a Aaho pNa to iryaajaacyaa maaQyamaatUna jaast caaMgalyaa p`karo control maQao yao] Xakto. ]<ama vaacanaÊ mananaÊ icaMtnaÊ klaaËutIcao AQyayana (aMcyaa maaQyamaatUna %yaacaa ivakasa jaast inayaM~It pNao krta yaotÜ.

]<ama p`tIBaa mhNajao kovaL dovad<a jana@yaM~ AsaNao Asao naahI tr ]<ama p`karo ivaksaIt Jaalaolaa pirxak AsaNao doKIla Aaho. Anaok p`karcao AËuitbaMQa inamaa-Na hÜt Asatat %yaatIla klaabaIjaacyaa jaastIt jaast javaL jaaNaara AËutI baMQa inavaDnao ho ]<ama pirxakca kÉ XaktÜ.
(a dÜhUMcaa jaIqao sauMdr imalaaÔ AsatÜ AXaa klaakaraMcyaa klaaËutI e@p`karcyaa AMgaBaUt saÝMdyaa-naoÊ AMgaBaUt vaOiXaz\yaanao yau> Asatat. %yaaMcaa pirNaama %yaa klaËutIlaa inarpo@Xa pNao BaoTNaayaa- risakavar kuzlyaa naa kuzlyaa p`karo nai@kca hÜtÜ.

klaakarcaI AiBa$caI jaI vaacanaÊ mananaÊ icaMtna Ê AnauBavaÊ BaaXaaÊ ivacaarÊ BaavaivaXvyaÊ (aMcyaavar AvalaMbaUna Aaho. AiBa$caI hI klaakaracyaa vaya>Ik janakp`iËyaolaa doKIla indirectly baaMQaIla Aaho. tsaoca tI kahI p`maaNaat ba(ivaXvaaXaI doKIla baaMQalaolaI Aaho. %yaamauLo klaainamaI-itlaa ek p`karcaa baa( saMdBa-hI AsatÜca AsatÜ. AiBarÉcaI kXaanao jaast p`BaavaIt Aaho (avar klaaËutIcao AMgaBaUt vaOiXaXz\yaa eka mayaa-dopya-Mt AvalaMbaUna Asato.

eKdI ivacaasa-rNaIÊ eKada kavya p`karÊ eKada kvaIÊ eKadI pirisqatI (aMcyaa jyaa p`MAaNaat AiBa$icavar pgaDa Asaola %yaa p`maaNaatca tÜ klaaËutImaQao jaaNavat AsatÜ. eKada p`Baava vaa[t ikMvaa caaMgalaa ho mhNaNao malaa trI yaÜgyaa vaaTt naahI.

karNa Asaa p`Baava Asalaa trI jar ]<ama jana@yaM~ jao AiQak inasaga-d<a Aaho AiNa ]<ama ip`xak jaÜ iryaajaanao saulaaKUna Gaota yaotÜ (aMcyaa AQaaro %yaa p`BaavaaKalaI doKIla klaaËutIt klaakaracaa ³jana@yaM~ va pirxak´ (aMcyaa AMgaBaUt zsaa inaXcaItca p`BaavaXaalaIpNao vya> hÜ] XaktÜ.

mhNauna p`tIBaocaI vyaa@yaa krtanaa maI klaakaraica AiBa$caI jaI mah%vaacaI Aaho tI ivacaarat GaotlaI naahI. svatM~ AiBa$caI mhNajao caaMgalyaa tho-nao tune kolaolyaa jana@yan~ va pirxak (aMcaI XaÜBaa vaaZvaNaro ek JagaJagaIt maÜtIÔUla Aaho.



Ashishchaskar
Thursday, March 11, 2004 - 2:21 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaacana Ê manana icaMtna yaaMcao mah<va iryaajaasaarKoca Aaho Asao vaaTto. ]dahrNa Vayacao Jaalao tr eKada saUr manaat GaÜLt AsatÜÊ pNa iryaajaaABaavaI gaL\yaatUna ]trt naahI. ksadar gaayak manaat ]maTNaaro AvaGaD saUrhI gaL\yaatUna vya> k$ XaktÜ.

inasaga-d<a kahI doNagaI Asato kI naahI ho saaMgaNao kizNa vaaTto pNa jao kahI Asato to ]<amap`karo tune kravaI laagato ho Kro Aaho. inairxaNa Ê vaacana Ê mananaÊ icaMtna yaa sagaL\yaatUnaÊ saÜPyaa Xabdat saaMgaayacao tr hÜto Asao kI Ê ]<amaÜ<ama gaÜYTI tumhalaa phayalaa imaLtat. %yaacaa saMskar hÜtÜ. %yaamauLo AiBaÉcaI sauQaarto. dRYTIcao AayaamaÊ kxaa ÉMdavatat. yaa sagaL\yaacaa pirNaama nakLt pNao tumacyaa inaima-tIp`iËyaovar ³ janakyaM~avar´ hÜtÜca. %yaamauLo var idlaolyaa janakyaM~atlaa kÜNatahI Baaga kmaI mah<vaacaa zrt naahI.

pNa qaÜDa ApUNa- vaaTtÜ. tÜ Asaa kIÊ vya>I ³ inamaa-tI ´ jyaa saamaaijak vaatavarNaat vaaZto %yaacaa ]llaoK kuzo kolaolaa naahI. mauLat inaima-tIcaI p`iËyaa hI vya>IkoMid`t AsalaI trI tI puNa-tÁ tXaI nasato. Aajaubaajaulaa GaDNaaáyaa GaTnaaMcaI spMdnao ho hI ]maI-cao ek p`mauK karNa Aaho. GaTnaa GaDtat mhNaUna ivacaar yaotatÊ ivacaar yaotat mhNaUna ]maI- hÜto. p`%yaok jaNa Aapplyaa maapdMDanausaar GaDNaaáyaa GaTnaaMcao vagaI-krNa / maUlyamaapna krt AsatÜ. %yaamauLo tumacyaa naOitktocyaa klpnaaÊ AayauYyaaivaYayaIcyaa saMklpnaa yaa sagaL\yaa gaÜYTIcaa p`BaavahI inaima-tIvar hÜt AsatÜ. saamaaijak pirisqatI jasajaXaI badlalaI tsatsao saaih%yaacao sva$p badlalao ho yaava$na ho isaw hÜto kI saBaÜvatalacyaa vaatavarNaacaa pirNaamahI p`itBaa /creativity var hÜt AsatÜ. tsaoca iBaÙa p`kRtIcyaa maaNasaaMkDUna hÜNaarI inaima-tI ³]cca naIca Baod saÜDUna´ ho vaogavaogaL\yaa p`karcaI Asato. %yaalaa ‘AiBavya>I’ Asao kdaicat mhNat Asaavaot.

hI AiBavya>I AaiNa saamaaijak pirisqatIcaa hÜNaara pirNaama varcyaa janakyaM~at kuzo ilaihNaar Æ



Paragkan
Thursday, March 11, 2004 - 4:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

malaa vaaTtM poXavyaanao ‘saamaaijak pirisqatI’caa AMtBaa-va %yaacyaa XaovaTcyaa pÜsT maQyao ‘baa(ivaXva’ yaa saMklpnaot kolaolaa Aaho. %yaacaa ‘janana p`iËyaovar’ AsaNaara p`Baava %yaanao ‘AiBaÉcaI’cyaa maaQyamaatUna jaÜDlaa Aaho. varcyaa janakyaM~at tÜ

baa(ivaXva _________ AiBaÉcaI _______ janak

Asaa ‘AiBaÉcaI’pasaUna bifurcate k$na daKvata yaošla.


Ashishchaskar
Friday, March 12, 2004 - 6:34 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maaJyaamato ‘baa(ivaXva’ caa caÝkÜna AiBaÉcaIÊ janak AaiNa ]maI- yaa itGaaMnaa jaÜDNaara Asaavaa.
What u say ?

Dhruv
Tuesday, March 16, 2004 - 8:27 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

kivata AavaDto mhNajao kaya (acaahI šqao ivacaar hÜ} XaktÜ ka Æ

karNa jar ho yaM~ vyavasqaIt kaya-rt³ tune ´ zovaayacaM tr yaM~ vaaprayacyaa }_oXaakDohI phayalaa hvaM....


Peshawa
Sunday, November 28, 2004 - 12:54 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

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