namaste Mitraho,
marathi madhil changale gazal ani sher ya BB var sankalit karata yetil ka ? mi itar BBs var pahile pan mala ha kavya prakaar farach turalak adhalala
(a couple under 'Suresh Bhat', 'Bhausaheb Patankar' and only one more under I think, 'geetansh mala'); tar apan apanas je mahit astil te yethe deu shakal ka ?
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andaaj arashacha vaate khara asaava
bahutek arashacha to chehara asava
jakhama kasha sugandhi
zakyat kalajala
kelet vaar jyaane
to mogara asaava.
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Namaskaar Mitranno,
ha paha ek marathi sher,
chalalo mee ekta majala kunache kaay dene?
saukhya he lakhalabh tumha maj sadache chalane!
saukhya sare sampale an antari kahich nahi
dukhkha maj jakhadoon thevi,shrunkhala payee khari
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sundar!! lihit raha re.
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sagar29in, shaayaraache naav lihiles tar barey hoil. chhaan sher aahet.
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are shayarache naav aikoon kaay upayog?
ata mala swataahachi stuti karayla avdat nahi mhanun.
amhi nahi ja!!!!!!!!!!!
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svatcao Xaor AsatIla tr KuXaala tsao ilahI. kÜNaI ragavaayacao naahI hM tuJyaavar. ;o)
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dhoor kewal ha uthe ka kalat nahi
hi chita ajuni ashi ka jalat nahi
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sagar29, 'jakhma kasha sugandhi' ekdma sahi aahe!
Jiyo, jiyo!
btw, marathi sher/gazal che characteristics kaay aahet ? I mean, are there any concrete criterion that define a marathi gazal/sher ?
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EaInaIÊ Kilala link pha
http://home.talkcity.com/GalleryDr/yaadgaar/main.htm
itqao " gaJalaocaI baaraKDI " maQao tulaa hvaI AsalaolaI sagaLI maaihtI imaLola.
tsaoca " KoL " maQao gtp Aaho
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pausveda : manapasun dhanyavaad! maze barech sanshany fitale! :-)
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madira bharun vahe
saki kuthe disena
sparshavina tichya ha
pyala mala ruchena!
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te sparsha zale vegale
ann jahalya jagya smruti
te roop hote vegale
ann vegali hoti kruti!
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are gele kuthe sagle?
mehfil main sunnewale nahi?
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Sagar, don't worry! mi jenvha hitgujvar yeto tenvha ithale marathi 'sher'anche BBs nakkich pahato. lage raho, ya maifilit sunanewala mi nakkich aahe!
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sagar:mi pan!
chaan shayari aahe!
ek shanka aahe ,
"saki" la marathi pratishabda nahi ka?
ka marathi lok tevha arasik hote?
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amol are mulat hi shayri mazi nahi.(madira bharun wahe....)
mazi ahe ti sparsh hote vegale.......
tari mazyamate saki la marathi shabda GANIKA asava ase vatate.
dakhal ghetlya baddal dhanyawad.
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naahI saagar. gaiNaka ha yaÜgya Xabd vaaTt naahI.
maRd\gaMQa marazImaQao saakIlaa p`itXabd nasalyaanao XaayarI krNaaro Arisak hÜt naahIt. mauLat XaayarI ha kavya p`kar ]dU-maQaUna AalyaamauLo %yaaMcyaa XaayarIcaa p`Baava ha Apirhaya- Aaho. pNa saMsaÌtmaQao samaanaaqaI- Xabd Asaayalaa kahI hrkt naahI.
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thanks pausveda!
tula marathi madhye saki la shabda milala tar nakki sang.
arasikte baddalche spashtikaran chhan ahe.
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Andaja AarXaacaa vaaTo Kra Asaavaa
bahutok AarXaacaa tÜ caohra Asaavaa
jaKmaa kXaa sauganQaI ja,alyaat kaLjaalaa
kolaot vaar jyaanao tÜ maÜgara Asaavaa
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