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Vaibhav_joshi
Monday, August 29, 2005 - 12:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

panaaMcyaa hataMnaI ... ÔaMVaMcyaa cavaáyaa .... sauMdr ixap`a

Kmayuresh2002
Monday, August 29, 2005 - 9:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ixapÊ
Kup idvasaaMnaI....:-)
kivata naohmaIp`maaNaoca manaalaa BaavaNaarI:-)


Heartwork
Tuesday, August 30, 2005 - 3:41 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Aapna cand` nasatÜÊ
Aapna sauya- nasatÜ
Aapna caar iBaintmaQalaa
idvaa AsatÜ.
pna Aaplaaih p`kaXa..
kunaalaatir Kup hvaa AsatÜ


Heartwork
Tuesday, August 30, 2005 - 4:00 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ima~anaÜ ³Aaina maOi~inanaÜ´ maaJaa na Aaina t caa ]ccaar sauQaanyaa-saaiqa kÜnata ÔÜnt vaapÉÆ

Heartwork
Tuesday, August 30, 2005 - 4:06 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaibhav,kshipraa pamaa , tumchyaa kavitaa faarach chaan aahet. malaa khup lihavese waatatey pan ya font mule mi bobda banloy.
ek bhaashechaa docter bhetel kaa?

Vaibhav_joshi
Tuesday, August 30, 2005 - 6:19 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

heartwork

Ôkt iXaF,T AaiNa na (a dÜna kI ek~ vaapr

Sakhii
Tuesday, August 30, 2005 - 8:06 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

pmaaÊ
pihlaI dÜna kDvaI Ap`tIma²²

ixap`aÊ caana Aaho kivata.

sasnaohÊ
saKI



Paragkan
Tuesday, August 30, 2005 - 9:34 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

VJ: Cana ilaihtÜsa ..²

Xips: Good one !

Bee
Tuesday, August 30, 2005 - 11:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Heartwork - ur poem is short and sweet. surawateela tras hoto Dewnagareemadhe lihinyacha pan haLuhaLu saway hote aaNi lihit nahi toparyant chuka kaLaNar nahi. aapaNach thoDese keys press karun baghayache space madhe madhe deun mag kaLate kee kuThalee keys kashasathi waparat. generally ekasarakhe akshar asel tar thoDe caps waparun baghayache jase 'da' dawateechaa aaNi 'Da' dabyaachaa. 'tha' thaDagyaahaa aaNi 'Tha' Thashyaachaa, sha 'shahaamrugaachaa' aaNi 'Sha' ShaTakoNaachaa, 'na' naLaachaa aaNi 'Na' baaNaachaa, la 'lasaNaachaa' La '???? cha' :-)

pahilee wilaanTee fakt i aaNi dusaree wilaanTee don ii kinwaa ee.

ek matra fakt e aani don matra ai

aale ka lakshat.. lihi mag aataa...

Vaibhav_joshi
Wednesday, August 31, 2005 - 4:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Qanyavaad pragakNaÂ

AMttÁ ²²²

ek vaoDa...
vaagat Aaho vaoD\yaasaarKa
tuJaa AsPYT nakarhI
saÜDvat Aaho kÜD\yaasaarKa

ek vaoDa....
punha punha jaaš BaaMbaavauna
lahrI barsaNao tuJao
Ana inayaimat kÜrDopNa

ek vaoDa..
hܚlahI XahaNaa
samajaola %yaalaahI
vaoDatIla ÔÜlapNaa

ek vaoDa..
saÜDvauna Gaošla roXaImagaazI
samajaola tulaa AMttÁ
kuNaItrI vaoDM hÜtM tuJyaasaazI ²²²²



Lampan
Wednesday, August 31, 2005 - 4:15 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

sahI ro ...
ksaM kaya saucatM tumhalaa tumacaM tumhIca jaaNaÜ ...


Pama
Wednesday, August 31, 2005 - 3:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

mayaUroXa Ê vaOBava Ê saKI Qanyavaad.
vaOBava.. vaoDa Canaca.



idvasa klatanaaÊ
}nasaavalyaaMcao kvaDsaoÊ
dmaUna BaagaUna AMga Toktat.
calaa² punha ek idvasa saMplaa....
TLTLIt duparI saavalyaaMcao kÜnaÊ
baGata baGata ivarGaLlaoÊ
ekmaokaMnaa Cod do}naÊ
svat.Mcyaaca pirGaatÊ
hLuvaar ivasaavalao.
AakaXaacyaa inaLašt
AakMz bauDtanaa ...
tÜ saUya- ivacaar krt Asaola ...
jamaola naa malaa Æ
yaaca pirËmaot ..
]Va punha yaayalaaÊ
saavalyaaMnaa AQya- Vayalaa.


‘AQya- ’Xabd barÜbar ilaihlaa Aaho ka maIÆ



Moodi
Wednesday, August 31, 2005 - 4:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

pmaa sauroK Baavanaa vya> kolyaasa baÜla@yaa inasagaa-cyaa. hÜ AQya- barÜbar ilaihlaasa.

Kmayuresh2002
Wednesday, August 31, 2005 - 11:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaOBavaÊ
sauroK ro.. kIp [T Ap
pmaaÊ
kivata Cana Aaho .. tulaa XaovaTI ‘AGya-’ Asao mhNaaycao Aaho kaÆ




Kshipra
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 3:18 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

tumhI barÜbar
mhNajao
maI pUNa- caUk
Asao naahI
tsaMca
maI barÜbar
mhNajao
tumhI pUNa- caUk
AsaohI naahI

tumacao saUya- tumhaMlaa laKlaaBa ²

tumacyaa saUyaa-cyaa
]sanyaa p`kaXaat caalaNyaapoxaa
malaa
maaJyaa saavalaIcyaa kaLÜKat caalaNao
jaast psaMt Aaho
[tkaca (acaa Aqa- ²²


Kishori
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 4:40 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ixap`aÊ Cana ca Aaho...

Marathi_premi
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 5:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

mana

kQaI iTpur caaMdNao
kQaI caMd`acaa p`kaXa
kQaI kaLÜKI ra~
kQaI qabaklaI Aasa....

mana paKÉ paKÉ
ifro dUr dUr
qaklyaavar ifÉna
punha yaoš xaNaBar

kQaI ]Yaocaa ikrNa
kQaI ikrNaaMcaI phaT
idna ZLlyaavartI
saMQyaaCayaocaa qaaT....

mana capL capL
qaaMbata qaaMbaonaa
[valaasaa jaIva
XaÜQata saapDonaa

kQaI sauKacaI Cayaa
kQaI duÁKacaa DÜMgar
sauK duÁKacyaa saMgatIlaa
AÜlyaa Baavanaocaa pur....

mana hLvao hLvao
maQaoca qabako
AÜlyaa mau@yaa Baavanaa
DÜL\yaatUnaI Tpko






Heartwork
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 6:18 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

cand`avar svaair kÉna
jaasvaindica fulao AaNaUna
sauyaa-laa maaL Gaailana mhTlao..
AsabaostÜscao glaÜvsa GaalaUna²
AcaanakÊ kcakna..
dataKaila KDa yaotÜ
mhNajao yaacaa Aqa-..
XaIra Katanaa kivata kÉ nayaoÊ
iknvaa kivata krtanaa....


Heartwork
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 6:37 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

baIÊvaOBava manapuva-k Qanyavaad.
[t@yaa laÝkr maaJao ]ccaar sauQaaritla Asao vaaTlao navhto.
pNa tumacyaamauLo to Xa@ya Jaalao.
maayabaÜilavar Barpur caangaila maaNasao Aahot yaacaa lagaocaca p`%yaya Aalaa.
kÜNa tÜ baÜmbalatÜya ro..ikÊ maraiz maaNausa holpÔula nasatÜÆ
%yaanaa maayabaÜila iXakvaa ro..


Heartwork
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 7:05 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ixap`aÊ
saavailalaa kiQaih
vyai>%va nasato svathacao.
saavaila mhNajaoca
Aist%va p`kaXaacao.

tuJaakDo saavaila Aaho
mhNajao tuJyaakDo p`kaXa Aaho
cand` nasaola sauya- nasaola
idvaa tir Kasa Aaho.


Heartwork
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 7:17 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaOBavaÊ vaoDa Ôarca doKNaa Aaho

Shubhashish_h
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 7:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Vaibhav, kharach veda khupach chhan ahe...
pama....kasali sahi kavita ahe ga
kshipra....kaay sundar bhaav mandale ahes

Heartwork
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 7:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maraiz p`oimaÊ
ragaavanaar nasaala tr ek saangau.. saangtÜca.. tumacao mana caangalao Aaho pNa qaÜDo AÜqambauna Aalaolao Asato tr kivatolaa AaNaiK bahr Aalaa Asata.


Vaibhav_joshi
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 7:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Qanyavaad ²²²

prIxaa...

maaJaI tyaarI Aaho
prIxaa doNyaacaI ....
pNa
tLhatacyaa kagadavar
kuNaItrI
AaQaIca ilahuna zovalaMya
p`%yaok p`XnaacaM
samap-k ]<ar...
kagad purlaa naahI mhNaUna
purvaNaI jaÜDlaI Aaho
kpaLacaI....

Aata basauna AahÜt
ek maI Ana
ek tÜ prIxak ica~gauPt
vaaT baGat...
baola hÜNyaacaI...


vaOBava ²²²




Heartwork
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 7:37 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

pmaaÊ
tuiJa kivata Anaupmaca Aaho.
Baavanaa AaiNa klaa%makta yaancaa saundr maoL²


Ninavi
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 7:49 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ijayaÜ ixap` ²²² vaa ² vaa ²²²
pmaaÊ ‘AGya-’ mastca.
vaOBavaÊ ‘prIxaa’ Jakasa ²
AainaÉwÊ sahI ilaihtÜsa. iXara Ka}na Jaalaa kI naahI AjaUna Æ ³rvaa inavaDUna Gao puZcyaa vaoLI ²²´


Kmayuresh2002
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 8:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaOBavaÊ
prIxaa Canaca..
AinaÊiXaáyaaeovajaI pÜho Kallao tr caalaola ka roÆ


Kshipra
Thursday, September 01, 2005 - 11:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

heartwork,

kaya hvao to maja samajaonaa
kuzo Asao to maja gavasaonaa
kaya kuzocyaa Gana AMQaarI
jao Aaho toÊ to hI idsaonaa

AsaoM hÜtM kQaI kQaI %yaavaoLcaI kivata Aaho hI. idvaaÊ caMd`Ê saUya- kahItrI Aaho pNa to kLt naahIyao %yaacavaoLI ]sanaM kahIsauQda nakÜ Aaho.

varcyaa caar AÜLI kusaumaaga`jaaMcyaa Aahot.


Marathi_premi
Friday, September 02, 2005 - 2:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaOBava ‘prIxaa’ Kupca Cana Aaho

heartwork malaa raga naahI Aalaa.kuNaI jar AsaM saaMigatla naahI tr sauQaarNaa kXaI hÜNaarÆ


Sumati_wankhede
Friday, September 02, 2005 - 5:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

icara

baÜlalaaca nasatasa kahI
tr GaDlaMhI nasatM kahI
AvaoLIcyaa bahranaM AXaI
fulalaIhI nasatI ranajaaš

qarqarlao nasato mana Ana
AÜlaavalaohI nasato xaNa
barsalaa nasata hÜ}na vaoDa
inaLa saavaLa AaYaaZGana

DÜL\yaaMcyaa AarXaat ]gaaca
vaoDM trMgaNaarM AaBaaL
paNaavalaolyaa }na saavalyaaMcaa
Aasausalaolaa JaLaL

kQaI baÜlatIla AÜz tuJao
iktI jaa} Vayacaa kaL
kuzMvar japt nyaayacaI ro
maIca maaJaI AazvamaaL

Aata paya Jaalaot dgaD
Ana mana JaalaMya icara
ksaa Gaatlaasa sayaa Gaava
vaahI vaodnaocaaca Jara ²


Vaibhav_joshi
Friday, September 02, 2005 - 6:14 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saumatI Ê ‘icara’ Kup AavaDlaIÊ sauMdr ²²²


AMQauk ...

vaaTovartI caahula naahI
Baasa hI naa kuzlaosao ]rlao
idvasahI sarlaa rathI sarlaI
tuJyaacasaazI xaNaxaNa Jaurlao

tulaa kQaIcaI maI AMtrlao
trI ksao ho AGaiTt Jaalao
sahja tulaa maI Aazvalao Ana
xaNaaMt maaJao xaNa maMtrlao

iknaaáyaavartI maI qaaMbalao
hatI iXaMplao jaunao Aapulao
laaT ]QaaNao AMtrat Ana
DÜL\yaaMmaQaunaI maÜtI kZlao

Aata kQaI tu punha na yaoXaI
trI Aasa AMQauk AMQaukXaI
]gaaca pOMjaNa vaajatI CumaCuma
]gaaca ho kMkNa ikNaikNalao


vaOBava ²²²


Shubhashish_h
Friday, September 02, 2005 - 6:48 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

KshNat maZe kshaNa mantarale.... vaaa Vaibhav sahich
Kshipra, kusumagrajanchya oli chhan ahet ani tuzi kavitahi

Heartwork
Friday, September 02, 2005 - 10:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaOBavaÊ
tu pir@Xaa dot AsatÜsa tonvha Aamhalaa vagaa-cyaa dvaa-jaatunaca prt jaavaosao vaaTto. tuJao knkNa ]gaaca vaajat naaiht. Xabd\EaImant² BaavaEaImant²

inanaivaÊ
kivata ilaihnyaapo@Xaa [trancao kÝtuk krnao jaast saih² ho na@Xa~ancao doNao kuqauna imalavalaosaÆ tu savaa-ncao kÝtuk kto-sa tonvha malaa Aca-naa Aazvato. pna puQacyaa vaoila ima iXara Kanaarca naaih tumhalaa banvauna nai@k do[na hana

mayauroXaÊ
iXayaa- eovaija pÜhoca kaya kandosauw caailtla. kanVaÙpna paya Asatat mhTlao²

ixap`aÊ saainaka
baro Jaalao tumhalaa kLlao to
ima kolaa tÜ vaad naaihÊ
sanvaad hÜta.
tumacyaa klaaËuitlaaÊ
idlaolaa p`itsaad hÜta²

saumaitÊ
tuiJa kivata mhnajao isa@sarca² vaanKodo sToiD]ma var basauna ilaihtosa kayaÆ Ap`itma....AaXayaGana.


Vaibhav_joshi
Friday, September 02, 2005 - 1:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

haáTvak-

dad doKIla kivata Asau XaktoÆAamhI saaro ho h@kanao svaIkarNaar Ê Qanyavaad mhNaUna tuJyaa AapulakIcaa Apmaana naahI krNaar





 
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