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Sanghamitra
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 10:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saMjaIva sauroK )dyaspXaI- kivata...
AaiNa AXaI sarcastic comment krta yaoto mhTlyaavar lagaoca maayabaÜlaIkr hÜNaar ro baabaa tU. :-)


Giriraj
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 11:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaYao-Êto ‘kaL\yaa roGaÜT\yaa’ maI AsaM vaacalaM ... kaL\yaaro GaÜT\yaaMXaI salagaI... AaQaI kahI kLocanaa²dÜna itnada vaacalyaavar ]magalaM² Sorry

kivata manaatUna lagaoca maayabaÜlaIvarca ]trlaI... sahI hO²calanao dܲ


Mrcoep
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 11:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saMjaudaÊ
maayabaÜlaI var baa]nsar TakUna sau$vaat kolaI tumhI²²
AajaÜbaacyaa tÜMDUna p`omaÜpdoXa vadvalaat²
yao] Va AajaUna.


Paragkan
Thursday, March 03, 2005 - 10:06 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

sanjuda Ê kivata AavaDlaI kI dad dotatca laÜk [qao. kuNaI ]gaIcaca dad dot naahI AaiNa ]gaIcaca raKUna zovat naahI. pNa p`%yaok jaNa [qao ilaihlaM gaolaolaM sagaLca vaacatÜca AsaM naahI. :-)

Arunima
Thursday, March 03, 2005 - 10:54 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saMjaIva mastca Aaho kivata

Hawa_hawai
Thursday, March 03, 2005 - 10:59 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

good1 saMjauda .. .. ..

Parnheen_jhaad
Thursday, March 03, 2005 - 1:22 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

AazvaNaI ...

jaIvanaat sava- kahI hÜtMÊ pNa
tu maa~ navhtIsa
tuJyaa AazvaNaI hÜM%yaa
pNa tuJaa tÜ spXa- navhta
AjaunahI AazvaNaI Aahot ... f> AazvaNaI ²

AaplaI tI phIlaI BaoT
Aazvat nasaola tulaa Ê
pNa mana maaJaM vaoDM
ivasart naahI tulaa

tu AalyaavarÊ
najar caukvauna savaa-McaI
maaJa tulaa baGaNaM
tuJa hLuca hsaNaM
AjaunahI Aazvat malaa

Xabd nasalao baÜlaayalaa
trI tuJyaaXaI baÜlaNaM
AÜzaMkDo paht tuJyaa
tuJaM sava- eokNaM
AjaunahI AazvatM malaa

hvaonao tuJao kosa ]DNaM
kÜmala AXyaa naajauk hataMnaI
tuJaM %yaaMnaa saavarNaM
hLuca najaroAaDuna malaa pahNaM
AjaunahI AazvatM malaa

hla@yaaXaa pavasaat
tuJaM naacaNaM
pavasaacyaa sarI hatavar Jaolat
hLuca %yaaMnaa iTpNaM
AjaunahI Aazvat malaa

[valyaaXaa gaÜYTIvar
tuJaM ÉsaNaM
hsat hsat [valyaaXaa
tuJyaa DÜL\yaaMca rDNaM
AjaunahI Aaqavat malaa

svaPnaaMcyaa jagaat
tuJa rmauna jaaNaM
p`%yaok xaNaalaa
naivana svaPna pahNaM
AjaunahI Aazvat malaa

caaMdNyaaMnaa saaxa zovauna
tuJaM Aapla mhNanaM
caadNyaaMnaa kuXaIt Gao}na
tu JaÜpI jaaNaM
AjaunahI Aazvat malaa

tÜca caMd` saaxaIlaa zovauna
tu mhNaavaM
‘ivasaÉna jaa malaa’
AjaunahI Aazvat malaa ²


Prasadmokashi
Thursday, March 03, 2005 - 2:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


saMjaudaÊ kivata AavaDlaI ro... Cana ilaihlaM Aahosa AgadI.

pNa-hIna JaaDaÊ tuJyaa AazvaNaI hurhur laavaNaaáyaa... sauMdr.

tumha dÜGaaMcaohI gaulamaÜhÜr maQao svaagat.

~ p`saad


Bhramar_vihar
Thursday, March 03, 2005 - 11:28 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saMjauda...Jakasa..jaraXaI paDgaavakrI vaLNaacaI kivata vaaTto KrI pNa maJaa Aalaa.

Zaad
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 1:35 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ikMvaa AsaohI naahI...²

tI AXaI laaDanao javaL yaoto tovha
AakaXaatlaI caaMdNaI hatat
Aalyaacaa Baasa hÜtÜ
ikMvaa AsaohI naahIÊ
ksalyaa Anaaimak gaMQaanao Ba$na
raihlaolaa Xvaasa hÜtÜ.

tI AXaI laiTko ÉsaU pahto tovha
AakaXaatlaa caMd` Zgaat
hLUca lapUna basatÜ
ikMvaa AsaohI naahIÊ
maaJaa imaXkIla XabdhI
]gaIca japUna AsatÜ.

tI AXaI DÜLo Ba$na ]dasa pahto tovha
AakaXaatlaI naxa~ qaÜDI
hlalyaasaarKI vaaTtat
ikMvaa AsaohI naahIÊ
maoGaaMcyaa raMgaa manaava$na
caalalyaasaar#yaa vaaTtat.

tI maaJaI kivata maaJyaasamaÜrca vaacato tovha
itcyaa DÜL\yaaMtUna maaJaIca navyaanao
AÜLK malaa hÜt AsatoÊ
ikMvaa AsaohI naahI...²







Jayavi
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 1:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saMjaUÊ sauÉvaatIlaaca ekdma senty kolaMsa ro ²² Kupca sauroK ²²

pNa-hIna JaaDaÊ ekdma hLUvaar AaiNa idla kÜ CUnaovaalaI ²²


Kshipra
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 1:59 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ek maI AaiNa dÜna kivata

maI
%yaacaI kivata
maugQa najarotUna sauÉ hÜ}na
dohacyaa sava- AaDvaLNaanao
%yaacyaa Xaojaopya-Mt pÜhÜcaNaarI...
maI.. %yaacaI kivata

........................................

maI
tuJaI kivata
maÝnaatUna sauÉ hÜ}na
manaacyaa ek ek gaaByaalaa spXa- k$na
AMtsqa maI pya-Mt pÜhÜcaNaarI...
maI.. tuJaI kivata


Gandhar
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 2:07 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ixap`a
Cana.. ‘’AMtsqa maI pya-Mt pÜcaNaarI‘’.... vvaa²² :-)


Limbutimbu
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 2:17 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

hmmm... ixap`aÊ Cana²

maI.. ..
maaJaIca kivata
jaIvana iJarpvauna Xabdatuna
Xabd toca punha jagat
Aintma roYaa XaÜQaNaarI
maI.. maaJaIca kivata :-)

tU..
maaJaIca kivata
jaIvana iJarpvauna AaBaasaatUna
Baasamaya toca punha jagat
taTatuTIcaa xaNa XaÜQaNaarI
tU.. maaJaIca kivata

PS: ho ivaDmbana naahI ho
hva tr klpnaa ZaplaIho Asa mhNaa²



Limbutimbu
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 2:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

40 iTmbaÆ
ixap`a %yaa 40 iTmbaanaIca malaa p`orNaa idlaI bar²
maaga kivatotlaa iTmbaancaa yaXasvaI / AyaXasvaI vaapravar cacaa- JaalaI hÜtIÊ tI kuz hoÆ
:-)

Kiru
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 3:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saMjauda kivata Kup AavaDlaI.
pNa-hIna JaaD.. ‘AazvaNaI’ baraca kaL AazvaNaIt rahIla AXaI.. sauMdr.


Mulundakar
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 4:14 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ilaMbaudada hI kivat pNa saihca Aho²

Niravkul
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 4:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

zaad, really great, thank you

Sanjuda
Saturday, March 05, 2005 - 4:55 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saMGaima~aÊlaalaUʜuiYakoXaÊp`saadÊAÉiNamaaÊjayaavaIÊik$
p`saadÊBa`marÊ hvaahvaaš tumha savaa-Mcao manaapasaUna AaBaar ²

pNa-ihna JaaDaÊ hLvyaa AazvaNaI jaagyaa Jaalyaat.

ima~aMnaÜÊ
maÜbaašla var ek kivata ilaihtÜya lavakrca pÜsT krtÜ.mauKDa saucalaaya Asaa...
barI vaašT ka Asaonaa
jaXaI p`%yaokalaa hvaI Asato baašla
AgadI saokMD hM^D ka Asaonaa
tsaa AavaXyak AsatÜ maÜbaašla


Sanjuda
Saturday, March 05, 2005 - 5:01 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saMGaima~aÊlaalaUʜuiYakoXaÊp`saadÊAÉiNamaaÊjayaavaIÊik$
p`saadÊBa`marÊ hvaahvaaš tumha savaa-Mcao manaapasaUna AaBaar ²

pNa-ihna JaaDaÊ hLvyaa AazvaNaI jaagyaa Jaalyaat.

ima~aMnaÜÊ
maÜbaašla var ek kivata ilaihtÜya lavakrca pÜsT krtÜ.mauKDa saucalaaya Asaa...
barI vaašT ka Asaonaa
jaXaI p`%yaokalaa hvaI Asato baašla
AgadI saokMD hM^D ka Asaonaa
tsaa AavaXyak AsatÜ maÜbaašla


Parnheen_jhaad
Saturday, March 05, 2005 - 1:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saadÊ ikÉÊ saMjauÊ jaayavaI ... maI maaiNak ... far puvaI- maayabaÜlaIvarca AsaayacaÜ pNa maQyaMtrI nav*tÜ Aata punha AalaÜ Aaplyaa %yaaca GarI %yaaca darIÊ AazvaNaI (a sadOva smarNaat rahavyaat yaasaazIca Asatat pNa kQaI kQaI AazvaNaI farca ~asadayak zrtat ... nakÜXaa vaaTtat pNa XvaasaaXaI jao baaMQalaolao Asato to kQaI k sauTto tr maga AazvaNaI trI kXaa sauTtIla .... Asaca kahI lailat gaVamaQyao hI ilahIlao Aaho ... to hI vaacaala vaoL Asalyaasa ... AavaDola Asao tr naohmaIca vaaTto ....

maaiNak


Parnheen_jhaad
Saturday, March 05, 2005 - 1:30 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

kuzuna kÉ saurvaatÊ
sagaLIkDo XaovaTca idsat hÜta
maavaLaNaara tÜ sauya-
samaÜrca idsat hÜta
hvaM hvaMsa vaaTt hÜtM jaIvana
pNa AaXaocaa maaga- idsat navhta
kaL\yaaBaÜr ra~Icyaa AMQaarat
kajavaahI camakt navhta
pa}laapuZo pa}la Takt
puZo sarkt hÜtÜ
samaÜrcyaa AMQaaralaa maagao
TakNyaacaa p`ya%na krt hÜtÜ ...


Jayavi
Sunday, March 06, 2005 - 8:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maaiNakÊ Kupca sauroK ilahItÜ Aahosa Ê AjaUna yao} dot ²²




 
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